listen gus,, this is my first english poem,,, So plz be kind while commentin :)
You told me you love
You told me you do
You promise I’ll be
4 ever with you
You told me you will
Be by my side
Your love will be
My safety guide
Our love should take us
To the lovely land
To the sunset view
To the golden sand
To the beach of romance
To the warm blue sea
To the tall green palm
To the walnuts tree
I thought true love
Could never stop
& lovely feelings
Would never dropped
I trust your words
I thought it was true
& all the promises
Never done by you
You cheat while loving
You lied in chat
You killed my feelings
& broke my heart
I used to be happy
When think about you
I loved you babe
& still I do
I love you deeply
I’m mad about you
In spite of all lies
I couldn’t hate you
I hope u like it :)
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يا بت عمي الحاصل شنو. صباح الخيربالليل ده شكله شاكوش مسخن. يا زولة الله يستر علينا و حالتنا ما تستفحل زيك ههههه ابقي اظهري و كل سنة و انتي طيبة
Truely beautiful and sincere.. keep it up sis..
لمزيد من الإبداع .. رائعة (القصيدة)!!
شكرا للتواصل ..سلام
محمد
بت عمي بالغت معاي... ماكنت قايلة الشاكوش واااضح كدة... هههه
precious ومحمد تسلمو على المرور والتعليق...
waaaaaaw,,really mazing and beauti,,i like it ;)
hi eman..really it's a nice poem..keep it up my sis
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